Edit workshop copy for clarity

Make the copy concrete

Replace a vague promise with the output learners will create. Explain unfamiliar terms the first time they appear. Keep prerequisites, time commitment, and tool requirements easy to find.

Review every claim

Check names, dates, prices, outcomes, testimonials, and links against the approved offer. Remove unsupported comparisons and guaranteed results. Label example work as an example rather than a result every learner will achieve.

Read like a learner

Scan the page on a phone. Check whether headings tell a coherent story and whether the next action matches the run’s status. Ask a new reader to explain the workshop back to you. Use the places they hesitate to decide what to rewrite first.